Acoustic Original

[Jason]

EDIT: There's a version with vocals here! soundcloud.com/jasongorton



This might be the wrong forum to post this in but I'd love any feedback.

Just a collection of chords at the moment in a vague, basic structure (somewhat improvised ;D) but I plan to put vocals to it.

[Carlos Lobo]

Off course this is not the wrong forum to post this. I'd hate to know that all the Michael Angelo Batio fans are only fans of shredding, because that's not what MAB is all about. Proof of that is his Holiday Strings album. This is a forum for everyone who enjoys music, and I'm one of those. I liked your song. Often I love instrumental songs more than everything, and I believe one should only add vocals if necessary. In this particular song, I believe you're right. Your song is actually asking for some singing, more than it needs solos in my opinion. I think most acoustic songs only need solos if they are a bit more calm than what you've played on this video. Even though your song has no distortion, it sure is very powerful. I would add some vocals deep from the lungs on this one. I don't know if you're still going to add more sections to the song, it's up to you, but if I were you maybe I would, but that's just me. But I think you're in the right path, good work.

[bigan0318]

Liking this JACE, Very well done. Agree with Carlos too, Deep emotion filled vocals would be a perfect addition. Keep it coming bro

[Jason]

Ah I totally didn't realise anyone had posted on this. Thank you so much guys I've actually did a self-recorded EP and this song is completely finished with vocals.

It's Track 3 here would be really cool if you could check it out soundcloud.com/jasongorton