short country song! ..i mean blues

[thepatient]

i got my new shure sm57 yesterday so i thought i would write something and record it.
it's short. 45 seconds.
not shred.
but let me know what you think.
www.speedyshare.com/558580512.html

i did speedyshare just for you steve.

[SendHelp]

That's not country man that's the blues

[thepatient]

it could be taken as both! haha.
i'm not very into country or blues so i really wouldn't know.
haha

[SendHelp]

well its a I IV blues progression you got there, blues, bluegrass, folk, and country are all different things don't get them confused

well its good anyway very chill recording there

[Slopternate picking]

Whoah adjust your EQ. It's way too bassy.

[blotto911]

this riff has been played to death chris, no offense, just some constructive criticism, you can still do the 1, 4, 5 progression, however, try an do it with another variation rather than the bada, da,da bada dad,da...etc... other than that, myself being a guitarist, I find anything done on a guitar fun to listen to, and I found it enjoyable

[thepatient]

i know it has been.
and it's played on my 7 string, the low b.
haha, so it's not all my amp.
it was just something to see how the mic worked.
a little fun, but thank you for your constructive criticism. :]

[Adji]

i agree wtih blotto, that rythym is very old a little boring now but this little trackw as quite relaxing, if you you mixed the rythym up a bit you could easily stretch this sort of thing out for a few mins.

[thepatient]

i think i'm going to redo the song today. i'll change the rhythm and see what happens.
usually when i write songs, i record one part, then do the next. i never really write a full song all the way through. haha