Post by blackorchidx on Dec 1, 2007 18:50:51 GMT -6
" wow this song is incredible, very well composed parts and the time signature changes aren't too abrupt. The tremolo parts could be filled in with other melodic lines as I found them a bit irritating. The finest moment in this track is at 5:35 which gave me goosebumps.
I'm not a huge follower of sweep picking but the players that I have heard do it such as yngwie malmsteen and jason becker are very clean and the muting is precise, i found that some of the sweep picking within this piece was a bit rushed.
For improvement I suggest looking into expanding on motifs such as elipsis, diminution, augmentation, retrogrades and inversions.
I could provide you with some materials to possibly improve this incredible piece of music."
Pete Stollery (Head of Music studies, Aberdeen University)
I'm not a huge follower of sweep picking but the players that I have heard do it such as yngwie malmsteen and jason becker are very clean and the muting is precise, i found that some of the sweep picking within this piece was a bit rushed.
For improvement I suggest looking into expanding on motifs such as elipsis, diminution, augmentation, retrogrades and inversions.
I could provide you with some materials to possibly improve this incredible piece of music."
Pete Stollery (Head of Music studies, Aberdeen University)
