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Post by (Insert User Name Here) on Dec 21, 2007 14:29:25 GMT -6
some messups, but it is just an idea
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Post by blackorchidx on Dec 21, 2007 14:37:37 GMT -6
understand timing and key signatures, i kept on losing where i was going, you need to learn what notes to use and what chords to use.
get a metrenome
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Post by (Insert User Name Here) on Dec 21, 2007 14:42:49 GMT -6
its just an idea, ill work on that later
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Post by thepatient on Dec 27, 2007 18:40:10 GMT -6
you need a structure to have a base for your idea...
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Post by (Insert User Name Here) on Dec 27, 2007 21:17:31 GMT -6
you need a structure to have a base for your idea... i accually came up with something today that makes sense |
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Post by shreddingjoris on Dec 28, 2007 9:58:05 GMT -6
did someone removed my post?
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Post by thepatient on Dec 28, 2007 15:24:34 GMT -6
yeah, but i saw it joris. it made me go: hahahaha
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Post by † Kenny † on Dec 28, 2007 15:37:48 GMT -6
well, this is intresting travis. but really i dont think i have anything to say :-\
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Post by shreddingjoris on Dec 28, 2007 16:26:41 GMT -6
who deleted it?
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Post by thepatient on Dec 28, 2007 17:01:04 GMT -6
no idea. one of the mods.
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Post by shreddingjoris on Dec 28, 2007 17:30:07 GMT -6
bah, no sense of humor :-)
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Post by BossMorley on Dec 29, 2007 7:48:28 GMT -6
darn missed it oh well....yes write in keys  |
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Post by masterh on Dec 29, 2007 7:54:52 GMT -6
i watched it and was left in a state of confusion  the bends at 1 min 40 need some work overall, with a better structure n some work this could be ok |
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Post by shreddingjoris on Dec 29, 2007 9:04:01 GMT -6
I got the PERFECT sequel for that awesome rif!! WHHHHHIIIIIIIAAAA GGGG TUTUTUTIETIETIE FLURELURELURE TAGAGAGAGA FUUUUUUUUUIIIINNGGG iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......fades........iiiiiii.......IIIIII..........feedback.......  [glow=red,2,300][/glow]EXPLOSION   (this is a remake,if anyone wants to delete it, pls tell me :-)) |
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Post by shreddingjoris on Dec 29, 2007 9:04:22 GMT -6
and i did it because i'm BORED ;-)
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Post by kgbrad on Dec 29, 2007 10:00:19 GMT -6
Bravo Joris!
Anyway, with some work, it could be a good tune. Of course, I'm really in no position to critique.
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Post by † Kenny † on Dec 29, 2007 12:09:26 GMT -6
alright here is my attempt at constructive criticism, im critiquing your work so when i hear the first riff itt sounds kinda cool, btu the second riff takes it to someplace completly differnt, and isnt in the same key or the same time signature to see how to change keys effectivly check this out the change at :26 and and 2:10 and how he changes the keys to get a specific effect. - gray pianos flying also i think the 3rd riff is random and wouldnt have aplace in that as a structured song your bends at :49 are pretty sloppy and the vibrato is very out of key, that would be an area to work on next time. I like the little pay at :53 seconds thats a cool thing that youcould turn into an awsome solo. i think for your skill level that this would be very impressive, but i would stay away from going into sweeping, legato or alt picking becuase this might spoil how cool this could sound. i also like the part at 1:20 but hate the part before it  somply becuase the part before it seems to not have any structure, the 1:20 part does, but that little thing after it does not and its not to fond to listen to for me the part at 2:21 sounds kinda blackmetally like xasthur steve will tell you if thats good though after this i think it all falls apart and goes to hell in a handbasket, i didnt listen to the rest so i might have missed a good riff or 2 tho hope this might help a little |
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Post by shreddingjoris on Dec 29, 2007 14:25:57 GMT -6
wow... u must be even MORE bored than me if u analysed that :-D
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Post by thepatient on Dec 29, 2007 17:21:33 GMT -6
and for the millionth time...
alternate pick!
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