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Post by themaidenmaniac on Feb 23, 2005 5:25:33 GMT -6
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Post by Adji on Feb 23, 2005 6:10:59 GMT -6
Its a bit repetetive. I would shorten it or vary it up a bit and then add some whole note powerchords in the background. Its decent though.
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Post by themaidenmaniac on Feb 23, 2005 6:22:57 GMT -6
Its a bit repetetive. I would shorten it or vary it up a bit and then add some whole note powerchords in the background. Its decent though. cool. Obviously, gonna have vocals over it too. Nice avatar  |
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Post by Blondie on Feb 23, 2005 13:54:52 GMT -6
Are You guys like twins ;D
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Post by Blondie on Feb 23, 2005 13:58:29 GMT -6
The Lick would be a cool opening for a solo  |
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Post by blackorchidx on Feb 23, 2005 14:13:24 GMT -6
The Lick would be a cool opening for a solo yeah it would do well as an interlude  peace |
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Post by Neoclasiccl on Feb 23, 2005 15:05:06 GMT -6
Nice Idea but just a note. The lead is out of key from the rythem guitar. Break out the theory books and fix it and you will be good to go. Also add a few change ups so it doesn't get too repetitive. Nice job thou ;D |
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Post by Adji on Feb 23, 2005 15:42:35 GMT -6
Are You guys like twins ;D Haha, we are satan's own sons. |
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Post by Blondie on Feb 23, 2005 15:52:20 GMT -6
LOL ;D
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Post by themaidenmaniac on Feb 23, 2005 18:30:44 GMT -6
Nice Idea but just a note. The lead is out of key from the rythem guitar. Break out the theory books and fix it and you will be good to go. Also add a few change ups so it doesn't get too repetitive. Nice job thou ;D oo ***! the chords were like B A F sharp etc.. I thought that the lead matched DOH!! crap,,, what keys was i playing in on the lead mate!? whoops!  |
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Post by themaidenmaniac on Feb 23, 2005 18:31:31 GMT -6
Haha, we are satan's own sons. Abso man!!  |
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Post by Luke on Feb 23, 2005 18:43:11 GMT -6
It was a cool little tune but if you alter it to keep it in key it'll sound alot better |
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Post by NotGuest on Feb 23, 2005 18:51:06 GMT -6
+1 about out of key. Also turn the gain down on the rhythm. The out-key rhythm kills the possibility of the lead to be alright. Also, the timing on the first arpeggio of lead seemed weird, but it was consistent, so its alright.
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Post by Gregocide on Feb 23, 2005 19:33:12 GMT -6
All in all, I like it. It gets a little repetative though, like that other guy said. However, the feel of it is very cool ---- you fly in sounding like a bat out of hell. Good work! |
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Post by themaidenmaniac on Feb 24, 2005 9:11:44 GMT -6
+1 about out of key. Also turn the gain down on the rhythm. The out-key rhythm kills the possibility of the lead to be alright. Also, the timing on the first arpeggio of lead seemed weird, but it was consistent, so its alright. ive realised now lol. I just thought the first note i hit was B (with the chord too), so it should probaly correlate, but after you said it, i relaised that if i did the full sweep arpeggio it would be A not be, so i shall promptly move it all up 1! Thanks for that!!! |
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Post by themaidenmaniac on Feb 24, 2005 9:14:30 GMT -6
All in all, I like it. It gets a little repetative though, like that other guy said. However, the feel of it is very cool ---- you fly in sounding like a bat out of hell. Good work! Thanks greg , im thinkin of using it for the outro chorus in one of our songs now, when i update the key of course. Thats the great thing about being here, there are people to point out errors which is damn good!!! I'll get on the key change now then  |
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