Looking for feedback! I'd really like to improve

[mudkipforceg]

i would really appreciate some feedback regarding finger tone, phrasing, cleanliness etc.

and since you're going to be tearing my playing apart, some ways to improve it would be better?

tbh i really have no idea how i can actually practice to improve phrasing or finger tone





Edit: can someone also tell me exactly what phrasing is? i'm hearing three different things:

1. it is note selection over a chord/progression
2. it is how evenly distributed the note values are
3. how well the notes flow together

[jani92jani]

this might help you, on that 1h guitar lesson steve vai talks lot about phrasing.