Post by shreddingjoris on Jun 19, 2014 4:59:55 GMT -6
That shredding was so mab ;-)well done! The slower parts on the other hand lacked a bit "melody". Meaning that they didn't have a build up. So the whole thing sounded like it wasn't going anywhere (like picking random notes from within a key). I had (or still have) that "problem", and it's something to work on. I realise it's a jam, but maybe listen to some "slower" "melodic" players that have great melodic licks even with pentatonic scales. Then mix it up with the shredding and u got it all ;-)!
Thanks! I appreciate the kind words and the constructive criticism. Next time I'll spend more time preparing before making a video. I do much better on jams I'm familiar with... I don't know why I picked a random track off of youtube. I just wanted to record something quick that showed off a little bit of my chops. I'm starting to practice a lot more often and I'm narrowing my focus really tightly onto my technique. The next one will be more melodic!